Pipe Lit Her As Bright.
Pipe lit her as bright,
smoke emitting she took a second bite,
light she bloomed in the night,
thought glowed quite:
nothing to make her fright.
Man entered her midnight:
grizzled grin from a dogfight,
frozen she stood with foresight,
company she did not invite.
Starved he walked with appetite,
annoyed she felt by the parasite,
packed she was as dynamite.
Boasting he did with overexcite,
not knowing she was hermaphrodite.
White knight came tonight.
– MGL
The last three lines remain far too unpacked and implicit, but the set-up is great: character, emotion, description - so all we need is proper exposition and denouement.
ReplyDeleteThe consistent use of backward phrases makes the whole thing rather Yoda-esque...
Speaking frankly, requirement such with avoid to difficult is that but.
ReplyDeleteRight absolutely are you.