Why does life make living seem hard?
Most people live to become beautifully scared.
"beautiful" a definition made by everyone
but also, all definitions flawed or wrong.
We are all beauty, but nevertheless
Beauty
can be differently expressed
So why does life make living seem hard?
So why does life make living seem hard?
And would
beauty exist without beautiful scars?
'Scarred' should be corrected in line 2, because the banal spelling mistake you made, radically changes the meaning of the poem...
ReplyDeleteFor a 5-minute-poem, the variation over the proverb and control of the form are both impressive.