Not my cup of tea
Yesterday, I was drinking a cup of tea
Earl Grey
It burned me
I threw the cup away
I scuffed: "Damn you!
I don't even like bergamot!"
The tea was everywhere
The cup was everywhere
I hate messes
I hate cleaning even more
Life's not going so great
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The first four lines have a fine, establish rhyme scheme and an interesting deviation from conventional metre. The latter part of the text disappoints a bit, because it gives up on rhyme and deteriorates into almost prose. Fine for 5 minutes of work, but could easily be revised into something more interesting, while still being funny...
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