Tuesday, February 28, 2017

Exiled to Solitude (Writing Game 8)

Author type: Poet
Abstract idea: Depression

Exiled to Solitude
Anguish is a concept few can fathom,
internal wounds concealed from the eye.
Jolts of pain may trigger a spasm,
yet none will ever question why.
Disregarded as a phase of sorrow,
the warnings seldom draw attention.
They say the ache is gone tomorrow;
a theory produced by incomprehension.

The worst of threats need not be rare,
underestimation is commonly applied.
The pysche is split in two by despair,
like the case of Jeckyl and Mr. Hyde.
Woes are hidden behind illusions,
a missleading smile and pretended joy.
Many are deceived by such delusions,
the grief will no one else annoy.

Clinical depression is a serious matter,
a parasitic menace embedded in the brain.
Mental resilience will break and shatter,
for it to feed on the prey till nothing remain.
The menace does not yield to force of will,
a host is not mired in negativity by choice.
Subjected to a void that nothing can fill,
repressed by a condescending inner voice.

Look in the mirror, the image is distorted,
morphed to reveal a hideous creature.
This is he who will never be courted,
devoid of any attractive feature.
Sleepless nights and no motivation,
no hope, no joy, no self-esteem.
Drained from years of deprivation,
this is he who no salvation can redeem. 

Reflection: This poem is engineered to invoke a sense of empathy among the readers, exploiting the subjective voice to provide insight in correspondence with the anguish suffered by victims of Depression and attempting to augment the level of comprehension. If the concept of Depression was processed with the author function of a prophet, there would have been a stronger focus on societal adversities which harbor the potential to induce the mental ailment, enabling the assessment of whether or not it will become a more common phenomenon to encounter in the future. Statistics may or may not be incorporated to increase the level of credibility and render the text more capable to persuade the readers.   






Skateboarding = Crime?



Skateboarding is a crime?
Skateboarding is better than rollerblading
Skateboarding is 100000000% better that all other sports
Skateboarding is for me
Skateboarding is not for sale

Skateboarding is not a crime
Skateboarding is fun
Skateboarding is a way of life
Skateboarding is cool
Skateboarding is damn fun

Skateboarding is the shit sukka
Skateboarding is my life
Skateboarding is one of the popular activities of today
Skateboarding is rad
Skateboarding is a sin

Skateboarding is still not a crime
Skateboarding is not a sin
Skateboarding is a crime
Skateboarding is

Skateboarding is life

You-Know-Who

Trump is worth billion of dollars according to one website but inspite of donald's estimate of two billion
Trump is a real estate developer that has amassed a fortune through owning key New York properties
Trump is one of the suits of the cardgame that will be appointed a higher ranking than any other suits
Trump is also using his trip to Minnesota to promote his latest book: "The America We Deserve"
Trump is buying into the sunny isles beach project that already bears his name last december
Trump is determined by the highest bidder who must lead a trump card after winning the bid
Trump is getting his comeuppance because he's now embroiled in a divorce from Marla
Trump is associated with and was seen as being blown by God on the feast of shavuot
Trump is lucky the interview he gave last friday wasn't published in Playboy
Trump is like the gentle touch of a lover in a secret part of your skin
Trump is taking his first formal step toward seeking the white house
Trump is led and you do not have any trump but you have the rook
Trump is the five; second is the jack; third is the ace of hearts
Trump is that he builds products with very good fundamentals
Trump is not called until after all cards have been passed
Trump is a delightful and entertaining visit to depression
Trump is referring to himself as " the comeback kid"
Trump is an asking bid to pick the best minor suit
Trump is not only one of the world's richest men
Trump is creating Trump international golf club
Trump is worth more than its companion hand
Trump is one of the best softballs in the world
Trump is the power of representation and art
Trump is the opposite of the flipped up card
Trump is not included in the above analysis
Trump is more nuanced on domestic issues
Trump is not a "black box" trading system
Trump is also to be found for a mere fiver
Trump is a company that is in dire straits
Trump is considered a suit in the bidding
Trump is still a rare and difficult pursuit
Trump is the mansion at seven springs
Trump is a combination of fire and air
Trump is the five; second is the jack
Trump is forever saying the obvious
Trump is risky if you are defenders
Trump is a natural no trump raise
Trump is more refined than a lay
Trump is the sound of a trumpet
Trump is an independent power
Trump is made up of all queens
Trump is not a candidate today
Trump is worth 5 billion dollars
Trump is the power of creation
Trump is finally decided upon
Trump is demonstrated joker
Trump is doing it to himself
Trump is not the 7 trumpet
Trump is on to something
Trump is club or diamond
Trump is left outstanding
Trump is a much sought
Trump is the messenger
Trump is the asking bid
Trump is keeping busy
Trump is now revealed
Trump is now stronger
Trump is a great dane
Trump is hearts joker
Trump is a very goal
Trump is on this site
Trump is important
Trump is activated
Trump is declared
Trump is sounded
Trump is selected
Trump is the jack
Trump is euchred
Trump is decided
Trump is hearts
Trump is driven
Trump is made
Trump is a suit
Trump is a self
Trump is the 5
Trump is used
Trump is cold
Trump is dea
Trump is ev
Trump will
Trump ca
Trump i
Trum
Tru
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Writing game 8


Author function: Writer
Notion: Sorrow

The time has come, albeit too soon. As the clock counts down, the only feeling there is to be felt is a heartbreaking, gut wrenching sorrow. The room is painted a grayish white, and a certain stench of medication and disinfectants is filling the air, as is common for a room like this. It feels too stuffy, nearly suffocating in the small room. When the doctor leaves after administering the first medication, the only noises to be heard are sad sniffles from the people in the room. Our main character has laid his head down and is slowly falling asleep now, surrounded by sorrowful friends, yet not understanding these strange emotions passing through them. He, for one, is content.

He may not have lived long, and he may not always have been treated as well as he may have deserved, but his positive attitude has helped him make it through every day without being brought down by sorrow. He deserved so much more, which may be why this day was particularly sorrowful for everyone else involved.

When the last medication has been administered, at last, he is at peace. And eventually, the sorrow his friends are feeling will pass.


Reflection:
Using the function of writer has been able to give me more wiggle-room as to how I wished to write about the notion, which was what I was looking for in this writing game. If I had made use of the author function of  e.g. the poet, I would definitely have been more constricted in how I was to write the text. The same goes for the author function of the bard or the song writer, where there are certain rules on how to create a lyrical piece. I suppose I could just as easily have chosen the author function of the playwright or even the novelist, as these do come rather close to what I was looking for in the author function of the writer.

Adam is God



Adam is coming
Adam is God
Adam is my what?
Adam is within

Adam is your father?
Adam is lonely
Adam is paranoid
Adam is boring

Adam is pleased with this
Adam is

Adam is powered by uranium
Adam is God???

Writing game 8

(A feeling of complete sorrow fills the entire stage. The sorrow which is present in this scene should not be comparable to the sorrow of saying a final goodbye to a beloved grandmother who died of old age surrounded by her large family with a smile on her face. It should rather be comparable to the gut wrenching sorrow of a mother attending the funeral of her young child who has died at a much too young age after several painful years of trying to fight cancer, without any luck. The sorrow felt while watching how the lid of the coffin is kept on during the funeral, knowing how the surgeries and medication has destroyed the beforehand happy and youthful face beyond recognition, and these having left behind only a mere pained and tortured shell of what her beforehand lovable and happy child used to be.)

Reflection:
This sort of text is different from other texts because it is a stage direction, and therefore not something that the audience will read. It is up to the actor and director to interpret the text as a helpful guideline of how to set the scene and the tone of the play. Therefore it is different in the sense that the audience will never know what it says, and will only know the performers' interpretation of it.

Writing game 8 - Oh how the fear consumes me

Author function: poet
Notion: fear

Oh how the fear consumes me 
that one day I may be gone
that one day I may be forgotten 
like a shipwreck lost at sea 
Oh how the fear consumes me

Oh how the fear eats me to my core 
takes my being before I'm gone
Takes my mind and heart 
takes my will to swim to shore 
Oh how the fear eats me to my core 

For the fear of death takes my life 
I become the thing I fear 
For I died a while ago 
not with body but with soul and mind 
for the fear of death takes my life

Oh how the fear consumes me
that I am already gone 
that I already forgot myself 
and am already lost at sea 
oh how the fear consumes me

Oh what is a life if lived in fear? 
what is a moment if not enjoyed?
And if all moments become just that 
then what will make my dimpled cheeks appear? 
Oh what is a life if lived in fear?

Reflection: 
In this poem, the repetition of lines in the stanzes and the rhymes and rhythms all work together to show the reader or listener a specific emotion, namely that of fear. If the meaning of the poem had to be written by someone writing in a more prosa-like form, for example a scriptor, the meaning would be described in more detail, yet with less obvious feeling than in the poem. The poem would also visually and formvise be changed into a prosa form and the rhymes and rhythms would most likely disappear when doing so. This would leave less to the imagination as it may take away some opportunity for personalised interpretation, yet it would call for a much more detailed explanation of the fear of dying in a more academic language. 





Writing Game Eight – 5 AM

Author function: Scriptor
Notion: Heartbreak/Sadness



The airport is silent that morning. It is barely 5 am, and artificial light lights up the room. Outside, darkness still rules, and fog has crept in, almost as a representation of her mood that morning. Being here was the last thing she wanted. She could not bear the thought of being alone once again. They had known this would happen from the beginning. This was part of it, but it was hard for her to accept.

Walking in, they barely spoke, the huge suitcase got checked in and everything was ready. Then there was nothing to do but wait. Wait for the inevitable moment when it was time to say goodbye.
When it happened, she fought so hard not to cry, yet it was breaking her heart to have to do this. They shared a long hug, looked deep into each other’s eyes. She knew her tears were blatantly obvious, but in that moment, she couldn’t control it anymore. Their lips found each other in a deep, shaky kiss, hearts pounding and hands shaking. This was it.

“I love you..”

“I love you too..” – So much!

Then her love disappeared into the crowd and all that was left for her was to go home.



Reflections:

Writing as a scriptor allows for more emotions to come through and for a story to be told. Furthermore, the story has potential is more personal and engaging. In the text above, the notion of heartbreak and sadness is viewed from a personal point of view in order to make the reader feel the pain of the characters. This is different from other types of author functions in the way that the reader gets a closer look at who the characters are. In academic writing, this type of closeness is not needed or created.

Had the notion of sadness/heartbreak needed to be described in an academic fashion, the article would have included studies describing in detail what happens biologically when a person feels such emotions and why they occur. Studies of how to deal with such emotions in the best way would also be included. Also, and academic article would include thoroughly reliable sources and a reference list of these at the end.

Finally, the language itself would be formal and from a neutral point of view in an academic article. The sentences would be more complex and longer while in the text above, the sentences are straight forward and full of biased language. 

Monday, February 27, 2017

Writing Game 8


Author function: rapper, in particular Nicki Minaj
Abstract notion: beef

Your album flopped, sandal
I’m lit, candle
Your single #1? Glitch
I’m still the queen of rap, bitch
Yeah, Meek transmitted that L
Should have wrapped it up, shell
But I’m about to hit back, Remy
Go so hard I get an Emmy
You must be smoking too much grass
Dumb ass? You mean fat ass?
This ass expensive, surgeon
You mad ‘cuz you got none, virgin
Your diss was soft, plushy
I never lied on my pussy


Reflection: Remy Ma has started beef with Nicki Minaj by putting out a diss track called “shETHER” and I tried to write a comeback using simple bars that Remy Ma criticizes Nicki for using. I could also have chosen to try and raise the bar, which Nicki is also known for, but I don’t have any talent for rapping, song writing, or anything of the kind so I stuck to the simpleton version. 

My Last Duchess (Kills My New Wife From The Afterlife And I Go To Jail For It)


You hung me up like a bell
And you must not remember well
That time I on you casted a spell
Your future wife will drown in a well
You will be spending your life in a cell

I’m Heaven and you’re Hell 

I Plead You To
















I Plead you to

Author function: Scribbler
Notion: knowledge, power, love, life.
I look at the person in the mirror. I see that person is myself. I look at myself, and my mind wanders while I talk to myself. About power, about nature, about knowledge, about practice, about darts. I come to think of a poem or I do not know if you could call it poem, but nonetheless a series of words that follow each other and starts with the same four words: I Plead you to. It goes something like this: I plead you to try, I plead you to practice, I plead you to strive, I plead you to evolve, I plead you to achieve, I plead you to think, I plead you to question, I plead you to challenge, I plead you to contemplate, I plead you to grow, I plead you to feel, I plead you to care, I plead you to worry, I plead you to listen, I plead you to love, I plead you to live. I scribbled these words to myself because I saw an idol of mine write something similar. I write stuff like this to better myself as a human being and to grow and improve in everything I do.

Reflection
There is a poem in the bit I just scribbled together, so if I had chosen the author function of a poet, then I would have focused predominantly on the poem. I had made sure it would be set in the way a poem normally is constructed. I would maybe also have chosen words that rhymed, in order to achieve a proper rhyme scheme. I would also have focused on punctuations to make it readable and also determine how it should be read aloud. I discarded the poet function because I like the idea of how it came about. The poem as it stands in my scribbling would look like this:

I plead you to
I plead you to try
I plead you to practice
I plead you to strive
I plead you to evolve
I plead you to achieve
I plead you to think
I plead you to question
I plead you to challenge
I plead you to contemplate
I plead you to grow
I plead you to feel
I plead you to care
I plead you to worry
I plead you to listen
I plead you to love

I plead you to live