We stand
before his last duchess
So young
and beautiful, wearing
A steady gaze
so loveless.
Why? I hear
the duke is caring
And loving.
I see it in his eyes;
A passionate
love for her that appears
To have
reached its demise,
dripping
down in lonesome tears.
I see the
curtain on the sides
Of the painting
he loved so greatly.
His biggest
love away he hides,
Making his
passion gone so vainly.
May it be a
desperate measure
To keep
close his beloved treasure,
So others
never grow affection
And risking
between them, spiritual disconnection?
Perhaps the
duke was in doubt
About her
happiness for him and her.
Did he fear
her bailing out
And therefore,
turned insecure?
I am
nothing like the young and pretty
Duchess. I
can only hope to use my
Charm and be
open and witty.
Anything to
obstruct my bye bye.
To him and
to others I will be happy and smile
So he never
must be in fear.
I will make
it worth his while
By him I
will always be near.
Is this the Next Duchess' point of view? I guess it must be, given the title of the poem... She has a lot of empathy for the Duke, which is a very interesting variation over the story's theme. Some few elements are missing. Since you already have her criticize the painting, you could have slipped Fra Pandolf in there...
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