Author
function: Romantic writer
Notion: Nature
Silver Lake
Once again,
I behold this deep and peaceful lake, frozen to silver. Reflected I see the outline
of a wretched and desolate existence, fading away, almost deceasing. All day, I
hear the woeful hubbub of shackled mortals. Shriller and shriller for every
day. I turn to thee to find a moment in peace. Every day I turn to thee. Only
thou can dim the agony that occupies my mind. Thine presence soothes my heart
and my soul. Thou bless my mood and still my heart, and thine divine presence
lays my body to sleep and sets my essence free. A year has passed and thine
picture fades from mind.
Once again,
I turn to thee in person to rejuvenate my soul and refresh my mind. I prepare
again for a year away from thee. My mind draws the picture anew. Oh, great Silver Lake! Thou art the center of life and beings! Surrounded by grand, castle-high
cliffs, which connect the peaceful, frozen waters with the calm of the dark
starlight-glowing sky. In thine reflection, all is connected. Almost intertwined.
Thou give life to florae, emerald bulrush leaves shaking in the tranquil breeze
of the night, letting go of bronze and ivory white dust fluffs, scattering
everywhere and blending with the blessed stars from above. Feelings of sacred
consecration. Once again, my mind is refreshed and my spirit is invigorated.
The direct address of the piece to the lake (apostrophe) is very typical of the Romantic writer function. The arcane language also fits the bill. Overall the author function here would involve a quest for the sublime through nature.
ReplyDeleteI actually thought the piece in places bordered on the prophet function's diction, but you are right that the main thing missing here is the direct address with a view to persuasion.