Function – poet
Abstract notion – Love
Love is amazing
Love is scaring
One day you meet a person
And next you start to develop
feelings.
Suddenly he is your everything
You feel vulnerable and
exposed
But then he there, showing the
way
Making everything seems great
And then suddenly it is okay
Love is great
Love is horrible
One day you are happy
The next day you are not
A fiery feeling fills you up
Make your thoughts go all
wrong
But then he is there, loving
and caring
Makes the day seem great
And then everything is okay
Love is red
Love is green
It appears like the seasons
With its changing colors
In the spring it is warm and
growing
In the fall it can become cold
and slowing.
It’s something we give
And it’s something we take
But in the end it is worth it
all.
Reflection:
The poem describes some of the
different feelings that follow with love, how you fall in love, how it feels to
be jealous, and how it is to lose a love and it also shows how it is all worth
it even though you get hurt sometimes. This poem does not have a lot of rhymes, but
follows a structure of nine verses in each stanza. If I had chosen the function
of a novelist the story of the poem would be different in the sense that it
would first of all not be restricted to a structures as small as the poem and
the story would therefore have a lot more detail. The story would have
characters that you would probably know the name of, and the story would have
some concrete descriptions of how it feels for the character(s) to fall in
love, to be jealous and to go through a break-up. Also a novelist would not use
metaphors as a poet does, because they have a lot more space to express their
thoughts.
You're right that both poets and novelists can use metaphor to great effect, but the poet is forced to concentrate their language more, due to restrictions such as meter and rhyme and general space limits.
ReplyDeleteThe poem was quite effective at conveying the feeling of love. Esp. the explosion of the line "Suddenly he is your everything" sounded real.
I truly love this poem! I love that you used the word 'love' twice in te beginning of each stanza. And I love that not all of the sentences rhymes. I like your description of love as 'colors' like the seasons and put in the picture - it is a very clever thought. Maybe this could also have been a very long text message for a crush??? ;-)
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