Saturday, March 4, 2017

Love is...

Function – poet
Abstract notion – Love

Love is amazing
Love is scaring
One day you meet a person
And next you start to develop feelings.
Suddenly he is your everything
You feel vulnerable and exposed
But then he there, showing the way
Making everything seems great
And then suddenly it is okay

Love is great
Love is horrible
One day you are happy
The next day you are not
A fiery feeling fills you up
Make your thoughts go all wrong
But then he is there, loving and caring
Makes the day seem great
And then everything is okay

Love is red
Love is green
It appears like the seasons
With its changing colors
In the spring it is warm and growing
In the fall it can become cold and slowing.
It’s something we give
And it’s something we take
But in the end it is worth it all.

Reflection:
The poem describes some of the different feelings that follow with love, how you fall in love, how it feels to be jealous, and how it is to lose a love and it also shows how it is all worth it even though you get hurt sometimes.  This poem does not have a lot of rhymes, but follows a structure of nine verses in each stanza. If I had chosen the function of a novelist the story of the poem would be different in the sense that it would first of all not be restricted to a structures as small as the poem and the story would therefore have a lot more detail. The story would have characters that you would probably know the name of, and the story would have some concrete descriptions of how it feels for the character(s) to fall in love, to be jealous and to go through a break-up. Also a novelist would not use metaphors as a poet does, because they have a lot more space to express their thoughts.

2 comments:

  1. You're right that both poets and novelists can use metaphor to great effect, but the poet is forced to concentrate their language more, due to restrictions such as meter and rhyme and general space limits.
    The poem was quite effective at conveying the feeling of love. Esp. the explosion of the line "Suddenly he is your everything" sounded real.

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  2. I truly love this poem! I love that you used the word 'love' twice in te beginning of each stanza. And I love that not all of the sentences rhymes. I like your description of love as 'colors' like the seasons and put in the picture - it is a very clever thought. Maybe this could also have been a very long text message for a crush??? ;-)

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