Writing game 4: textual intervention
Will she match him to a Spring’s day?
He is more fry and more hot
Feel the warm winds of May
The wrath of sun has come to an end
The sun can burn too much in May
But the sun will open up his face
You fine ev’ry damn time
Screw it, you hot all the time
Ok, but lay it out as a story, since it was meant to be a story.
ReplyDelete'Fry' is not really an adjective, so it doesn't work in the sentence "He is more fry and more hot".
"Ev'ry" is still a two-syllable word!