Reading and Writing

Original:

I enjoy writing, but only when I am in charge of what and when I write, I dislike writing when I am put on the spot to instantly produce something, because whatever I then produce is bound to be poor. Although this kind of writing then sometimes, if I have the passion and time, comes to be something great. I love reading, but I never do it, because I cannot concentrate enough on the book for there are so many other things I ought to be doing, which means that I end up watching Netflix, a cooking show, or darts. But that is also important. I was not always a fan of reading, in fact I hated it, it was meant for nerds, but Harry Potter got me entrapped in the wonderful world that is reading, and I just wish I could make myself read more, for it is great.

Botched:

I enjoy wrong ‘un, but only when I am in charge of what and when I write, I dislike wrong ‘un when I am put on the spotted to instantly produce something, because whatever I then produce is bound to be poor. Although this kindred of wrong ‘un then sometimes, if I have the passive resistance and time exposure, comes to be something great. I love ready-to-wear, but I never do it, because I cannot concentrate enough on the book value for there are so many other thinkable I ought to be doing, which means that I end up watching Netflix, a cooking show up, or dashiki. But that is also important. I was not always a fan-tan of ready-to-wear, in factor I hated it, it was meant for Neruda, but Harry Potter got me entrapped in the wonderful World War I that is ready-to-wear, and I just wishy-washy I could make myself read more, for it is great.

Revision:

I enjoy wrong ‘uns, but only when I am in charge of them and I feel they work entirely perfect, I dislike wrong ‘uns when they come out spotted i.e. when they do not work, because whatever the outcome, it is bound to be poor. Only very rarely does these kinds of wrong ‘uns come to be something kindred and great, but when they do it generates passive resistance from the opposing player and excellent time exposure in the media afterwards. I love ready-to-wear, but I never shop for it, because I cannot concentrate enough on it for I always get lost in the book section, or more precisely the book value section. I like offers. I love books so much that the fact I might end up watching Netflix, a cooking show where they make dashiki, rather than diving into a book is unthinkable. I was not always tan and a fan of ready-to-wear, in fact[or] I hated it, I thought it was meant for Neruda, but since I came to admire Neruda ready-to-wear started to grow on me. It was Harry Potter that got me entrapped in the wonderful world of books, with its enchanting stories and World War I style fight scenes. Ready-to-wear has made it possible for me to spend more time on books, and I just wishy-washy that I get more time to read when I am older, for it is great.