Tuesday, April 11, 2017

Writing Game 3



Help needs she, who thinks the wage gap is real.
If it was, I would agree, it would be a big deal.
But 77 cent to a dollar is nothing but a myth

If you feel triggered by my poem, here’s a picture of Will Smith

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6 comments:

  1. UnknownApril 11, 2017 at 5:38 PM

    Your poem made me laugh so hard! I like the way you criticize feminism and the way you ended the poem my making "myth" rhyme with "Smith" and putting in a funny picture of Will Smith :-)

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  2. GenkingApril 11, 2017 at 5:44 PM

    Would have liked a "m'lady" thrown in there for completion. Other than that it's a fun poem and the picture of Will Smith makes it even funnier capping it off nicely.

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  3. BentApril 13, 2017 at 6:42 PM

    I feel sorry for Will...

    "What if I was Heathcliff
    - it's no myth...
    Maybe she's just looking for
    Someone to dance with..."

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  4. UnknownApril 18, 2017 at 11:48 AM

    Haha! I think the backwards phrase is great because it is perfect for what the poem is about; hypocritical feminism! Though, I would have wished the poem was longer and with more rhymes than just the AA BB combination. But anyways, I still love your take on it and the unpredictable Will Smith picture, haha! Great job!

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