Friday, April 7, 2017

Writing game 13


First Draft

Reading can be entering a world of unknown and unworldly dimensions. It can enhance your sense of being and it can bring it down. Reading comes in many forms; nowadays the most common object of reading is through media and technological devices. Not like in the old days were reading were for only a chosen few and text, symbols and images were pressed onto crisp and white paper, maybe even parchment. Reading, instigates a path of wisdom and knowledge, it can make you avoid all of the mistakes others has done for you, yet we still seem to do them. Reading can make your eyes swore, or even make you realize that you need glasses. It can touch you, it can break you, it can make you feel like you do not give a rat’s ass. However, you should still read.

After word Reference

Ready-made can be entering a world bank of unknown and unworldly dimers. It can enhance your sense datum of being and it can bring it down. Ready-made comes in many form classes; nowadays the most common object glass of ready-made is through media event and technological devils. Not like in the old day beds were ready-made were for only a chosen few and text messages, symbol retailers and image converters were pressed onto crisp and white paper chase, maybe even pard. Ready-made, instigates a path. of wisdom tooth and knowledge economy, it can make you avoid all of the mistaken others has done for you, yet we still seem to do them. Ready-made can make your eye candy swore, or even make you realize that you need glasshouse. It can touch you, it can break you, it can make you feel like you do not give a kangaroo’s Assad. However, you should still read.

The last and edited version


When it is Ready-made it can save you a lot of time, it is like owning a world bank of extra time. It can enhance the sense of datum. Ready-made comes in many form classes; nowadays the most common objects is made in China and with help from those technological devils a simpler life is possible. Not like in the old day were ready-made were for only a chosen few and food, fabric and furniture were to be put together by the majority of people. Ready-made, instigates a path. A path of laziness and bad economy, it can make you avoid all of the fun it is to think for yourself, yet we still seem to buy it. Ready-made can make your eye candy fake, or even make you realize that you need a glasshouse (one ready-made that is). It can touch you, it can break you, it can make you feel like you do not give a kangaroo the time of day. And what about Assad. However, you should still need ready-made items.

1 comment:

  1. I can't believe you discarded a wonderful gift such as "unworldly dimers"! At least you kept part of "a kangaroo's Assad"... I enjoyed that you kept the serious tone of your original text in the third version, making it a heartfelt plea for enjoying ready-mades, even when made by Chinese devils!

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