tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969643805044278956.post6230386819363478084..comments2023-05-10T15:53:52.242+02:00Comments on Creative Writing AAU 2017: Seven "deadly" sinsBenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11845712266620744382noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969643805044278956.post-57006098723176009292017-04-18T20:59:23.163+02:002017-04-18T20:59:23.163+02:00You manage to maintain the function of the Romanti...You manage to maintain the function of the Romantic author: the author is present throughout the text and the reader is included into the author's thoughts.<br />The incorporation of the deadly sins into your text is really funny and well thought :-) <br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13569528298658395646noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969643805044278956.post-79854866167080343752017-04-18T15:40:11.073+02:002017-04-18T15:40:11.073+02:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14413007215051548947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969643805044278956.post-44817350339222039542017-04-16T19:35:26.565+02:002017-04-16T19:35:26.565+02:00I liked the "For who is not a sinner?" p...I liked the "For who is not a sinner?" part, it caught my attention and makes the reader more inclined to go on :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15213981058529314917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969643805044278956.post-1226976886391884322017-04-16T14:48:19.425+02:002017-04-16T14:48:19.425+02:00First things first, you already got my attention w...First things first, you already got my attention with the seven deadly sins. Second, I think you did well by putting every single sin into a broader light by describing how those different (mostly ill regarded) emotions can work beneficially for the human mind. Envy was probably my favorite because you mentioned the enlightening effect it can cause. Awesome!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09278038309780604725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969643805044278956.post-24788219375718199942017-04-13T21:48:10.985+02:002017-04-13T21:48:10.985+02:00I would say that the essence of the seven deadly s...I would say that the essence of the seven deadly sins can be expressed very well through sensation as well as emotion. And your poem is a very good illustration of exactly that. Lines such as "The soft mattress bends gently under the weight. A thousand feathers slowly lifts the mind far away" are very sensual and give a bodily sensation of what lying in a feather bed is like. So not only emotion... But the romantic poet author function is definitely fulfilled very well in your text.Benthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11845712266620744382noreply@blogger.com